[DISCUSSION] Herocraft: The Futureverse

[Fjordsen]

Eventually I will probably stop posting chapters, but I plan to make this into a book (And no matter what I do, they will be removed once I finish)

Although I need a question answered by everyone, should I include death/murder and if I do, should I add gore? I have no problem either way, its just going to determine how the fight scenes play out in Chapter 3.

Yes, I love gore stories. I read some really cool MLP fan fictions including gore, violence and war. A HC related fiction with gore would be awesome

victim130 - Please use paragraphs in the story, it's hard to read.

 

[victim130]

Yes, I love gore stories. I read some really cool MLP fan fictions including gore, violence and war. A HC related fiction with gore would be awesome

victim130 - Please use paragraphs in the story, it's hard to read.

I do use paragraphs, D: just formatting issues ftw. I'm spacing them now though (Gonna be a BITCH to fix later though ) I'm nearly done, got about 3 scenes or so to finish and its done, just trying to work out a fight scene at the moment. I really think you all will enjoy the first fight scene though regardless, I want 10 likes on my chapter 2 post before I release chapter 3 to the public! GOGOGOGO! (I would also like 15 on chapter 3 to release chapter 4 and so on.)

 

[victim130]

So what's taking me? I have another Little Benny Special in the works as well as I'm trying to figure out what's going to be put where in terms of characters in Futureverse.

Also please keep in mind I have an underactive thyroid which runs my sleeping habits. Its very hard for me to write when tired so I only get a few hours a day to focus on it D:

 

[victim130]

OK its up. Also I didn't test run this chapter, so bare with any spelling or grammar mistakes. BUT PLEASE point them out here so I can fix them. Also not sure if it was noticeable before, but I'm trying a new style of dialogue where I make more of the conversation stick to one paragraph. I also spaced the paragraphs this time (Fucking hate formatting on the forums, note pad and the lack of having word )

Enjoy though! I'll try and get number 4 out sooner than I did this one though [DOUBLEPOST=1358109504,1357859468][/DOUBLEPOST]
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Just making sure you guys see this D: Remember I want 15 likes before the release of Chapter 4!

 

[awsumguy75321]

OK its up. Also I didn't test run this chapter, so bare with any spelling or grammar mistakes. BUT PLEASE point them out here so I can fix them. Also not sure if it was noticeable before, but I'm trying a new style of dialogue where I make more of the conversation stick to one paragraph. I also spaced the paragraphs this time (Fucking hate formatting on the forums, note pad and the lack of having word )

Enjoy though! I'll try and get number 4 out sooner than I did this one though [DOUBLEPOST=1358109504,1357859468][/DOUBLEPOST]
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Just making sure you guys see this D: Remember I want 15 likes before the release of Chapter 4!

Does a 'creative' work?

 

[Haxnn]

Amazing as always! I think they get better as you write them.

 

[jazza411]

This seems like professional work. Great job victim130

 

[awsumguy75321]

Again, nice job, [user]victim130[/user].

 

[Haxnn]

It's been three days! I demand more lore! Take as long as you need... I'll wait.

 

[macura]

Who was the TC wiz?

 

[victim130]

Who was the TC wiz?

Just some low end new recruit. I'm saving the big guns for later hahaha

 

[awsumguy75321]

Just some low end new recruit. I'm saving the big guns for later hahaha

By big guns, do you mean people like [user]c12095[/user]?

 

[victim130]

By big guns, do you mean people like [user]c12095[/user]?

Yeah I have a major plot device with him

 

[victim130]

Next chapter is up, I feel like I may have rushed this one a bit, if you notice any problems I may have missed or plot holes let me know! Otherwise enjoy the new FC hideout



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I know I made that requirement and all, but fuck it, enjoy

 

[victim130]

Sigpit Tateve222 Multis_Revenge12 judgedread540 UltimateOptics dils1 You guys don't need to read but you guys are in or will be in soon!

 

[UltimateOptics]

Sigpit Tateve222 Multis_Revenge12 judgedread540 UltimateOptics dils1 You guys don't need to read but you guys are in or will be in soon!

Don't forget to make me badass
victim130

 

[Troppics]

Just finished chapter 1 - this is awesome

Really like the feel of it

P.S If you really want my thumbs up slap Freepers in there! <3

 

[victim130]

Just finished chapter 1 - this is awesome

Really like the feel of it

P.S If you really want my thumbs up slap Freepers in there! <3

Keep reading

 

[Troppics]

Finally got a chance to finished reading the remaining chapters....

FC BABBBBYY! xD

Loving it so far, Victor is a badass lol.

Cant wait for the next chapter

 

[victim130]

Ok so I'm pumping out 2 new chapters in a few weeks (Sooner hopefully!) Planning got reworked into an amazing insight :3 So I need you guys to help me! I haven't actually scripted a tiny bit of any of this. So from now on, I'm going to.

I really need help recording the past written stuff though D: Like events/character design. If ANYONE can do this labeled by chapter, I would be forever grateful! That and I will be able to move forward more rather than backtrack which would just slow the work process down D: Even though it was a fail on my part haha.

Look forwards to it!