Watter i got somethings you could make different/better on your build
heres a pic ill explain under the pic:
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Black ring:
the pruple line 'disconnect' here there needs a connections between the two areas of the puple
Red ring: mabye a bit boring something needs to happen here
this is my suggestions and i think they would improve the build![Stick Out Tongue :p :p](/main/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/tongue.png)
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heres a pic ill explain under the pic:
[being_totally_not_me]
![Edit.png](https://dl.dropbox.com/u/58413186/Edit.png)
Black ring:
the pruple line 'disconnect' here there needs a connections between the two areas of the puple
Red ring: mabye a bit boring something needs to happen here
this is my suggestions and i think they would improve the build
![Stick Out Tongue :p :p](/main/styles/default/xenforo/smilies/tongue.png)
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