Watter i got somethings you could make different/better on your build
heres a pic ill explain under the pic:
 
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Black ring:
the pruple line 'disconnect' here there needs a connections between the two areas of the puple
 
Red ring: mabye a bit boring something needs to happen here
 
this is my suggestions and i think they would improve the build
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			heres a pic ill explain under the pic:
[being_totally_not_me]
 
	Black ring:
the pruple line 'disconnect' here there needs a connections between the two areas of the puple
Red ring: mabye a bit boring something needs to happen here
this is my suggestions and i think they would improve the build

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