I like your application for the most part, but I have the following suggestions:
(1) Work on improving your grammar and spelling. Ontario is primarily an English-speaking province, so I think we can expect your English to be better than what I'm seeing here. If you can provide a counter argument for this (e.g., recently immigrated from Quebec or some non-English-speaking country, learning disorder, etc.), we'll be happy to waive this requirement.
(2) I'd love to see some examples (i.e., screenshots) of your previous work. Particularly, work that you and your friends have built together. The ability to work as part of a team is highly respected on this server.
Thanks!
Here are just a few, of many, ways you can utilize to increase your chances of getting accepted:
- Be 100% honest on your application
- Use the proper application format
- Include all of the information requested
- Post some screenshots of your past creations
- Lengthen your application
- Check your grammar/spelling
- DO NOT just re-post your previous application
- Make a great first impression
If you follow these tips, chances are, you will get onto the Whitelist.
After you have improved your application, reply to it saying it's been updated.