Drew's App

[Drew0692]

1. Minecraft In-game name: Drew0692
2. Location & Age: I'm a 19 year old male currently residing on the west coast of the United States. More specifically, the San Diego area, though I have no idea what this has to do with applying to a Minecraft server. But if my location is relevant, perhaps also it would be prudent to mention that I'm originally from New Orleans, LA, and that I've moved here under Active Duty orders with the United States Marine Corps. Is that too much? I hope not, because it was recommended I lengthen my application. I enjoy chatting, candlelight dinners, and long walks on the beach. I will be 20 in December, but I have decided that there is altogether nothing special about being 20 as opposed to 19. It's a rather useless birthday, really. Much like every birthday after 21, it really serves only to let you know you're getting older.
3. Previous Bans (Includes other servers): I have none. To be honest, this will be my first Minecraft online server because previously all I've seen has been ridiculous PvP wandering servers. So, if I have not joined any others, I surmise I'm probably not banned from any of them, either. Though, I also suppose since I have not gone through this rigorous "whitelisting" process with all the others, that I am technically "banned" from all others requiring this process, as I am not able to join them at the present time.
4. Referral(s): Is there some reward for referrals that I have not noticed? Otherwise, what is the point of this question?
5. How did you hear about Herocraft?: The Minecraft Forum. The official one, that is. It can be found at http://www.minecraftforum.net/ in case you were wondering. I also saw several postings on Minecraft server listings, though none of them were provocative enough to pique my curiosity. Perhaps you should brush up on your creative advertisement skills. Eloquence goes a long way, I hear.
6. Have you voted for Herocraft (No? Click here)?: Why yes, I have, though I find it embarassingly shameless that you would coerce people to vote for your server before they've had the opportunity to play on it. It's a bit like false testimony, I think.
7. Do you agree to the Herocraft EULA & ToS? I most certainly do. Thank you for asking a relevant question, finally.
8. Reason you should be accepted: Well let's see how lengthy I can make this. I'm not entirely sure why you find it to be particularly important. Perhaps you thought it would expose those who sought to grief the server. But then, if I were a griefer, would I really admit to such? Not likely. Or maybe it's simply an opportunity for brown nosing, ass kissing, and other witticisms of flattery. I'm not usually one for such things, but I'll certainly give it my best try... I'd really like to be accepted so I might have the opportunity to be a part of the grand community you've built here. That I may, if you would be so kind as to accept me, integrate myself into your outstanding world of adventure roleplay. Perhaps I shall have the chance to make new friends among like-minded folk, join their guild, and work for the greater good. Or maybe I'm just a lost soul looking for a home and through some manner of supernatural force, have been drawn to you.
9. Additional Info: Additionally, I would like to point out that perhaps someone has taken themselves a bit too seriously. It's not that I don't believe you have good intentions in this endeavor, but if we're being 100% honest on this application as you suggested, more than half of your questions are irrelevant to the point of becoming a chore. Perhaps now you understand my succinct responses. Also, I'm a bit insulted that you've suggested (bolded) I check my grammar and spelling as if they were horrendous. I've read over my original application, and found that there's actually nothing misspelled nor ill-worded. But in my most sincere efforts to appease you, I've done all that you've asked of me. I've even color coded the responses! But let's not step on each others toes here. You're just doing your job, and I'm just an average guy looking to have some fun playing Minecraft in an RPG environment. Is anything more really necessary?

 

[Photoras]

1. Minecraft In-game name: Drew0692
2. Location & Age: West Coast, 19
3. Previous Bans (Includes other servers):
4. Referral(s):
5. How did you hear about Herocraft?: Minecraft Forum
6. Have you voted for Herocraft (No? Click here)?: Yes
7. Do you agree to the Herocraft EULA & ToS? Yes
8. Reason you should be accepted: I wish to play on the server?..
9. Additional Info:

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[Photoras]

Your application is a bit lacking, here are a few tips to have a better chance of getting on the white list.

- Be 100% honest on your application
- Use the proper application format
- Include all of the information requested
- Post some screenshots of your past creations
- Lengthen your application
- Check your grammar/spelling
- DO NOT just re-post your previous application
- Make a great first impression

If you follow these tips, chances are, you will get onto the Whitelist.

After you have improved your application, reply to it saying it's been updated.

 

[Drew0692]

Updated.

 

[Photoras]

Well that made me smile.

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