Look, you have said you have updated it twice, when I can see little improvement from the first original application. I personally struggle to believe that you are 28, as even if your first language isn't english, a mature, responsible gamer would make a much more obvious effort to be accepted.
Please update and improve your app, because while I do want to accept you, at the moment it is difficult. Here are a few ways of improving your app:
- Be 100% honest on your application
- Use the proper application format
- Include all of the information requested
- Post some screenshots of your past creations
- Lengthen your application
- Check your grammar/spelling
- DO NOT just re-post your previous application
- Make a great first impression
Reply when you have updated, and hopefully I will see you on the server soon after that!