TheEvilFinger's IMPROVED whitelist app

[TheEvilFinger]

Hello HEROCRAFT! I am TheEvilFinger (In game name also). I'm 14,and live in British Columbia, Canada. I am sort of a video game fanatic. I play all sorts of video games ranging from FPS to MMO. I Played MMOs a ton before I heard about minecraft. I then spent most of my days laying minecraft until I got tired of it and just started playing FPSs to pass the time. Then I heard about Herocraft (pissed my self) and had to check it out. Now I'm here writing this app pleading to be accepted. In the past I have played on many servers, never have I griefed or been banned on any of them. I play by the rules and would enjoy becoming a part of this community. I love MMOs and I love mincraft so please, PLEASE let me be a part of HEROCRAFT!

PS, I apologize for my previous application. I wrote it during recces at my school and was in a bit of a rush

THANK YOU for your time and I hope this application convinces you that I am worthy of the whitelist

 

[Dasoren]

Here are just a few, of many, ways you can utilize to increase your chances of getting accepted:

- Be 100% honest on your application
- Use the proper application format <<<
- Include all of the information requested
- Post some screenshots of your past creations <<<
- Lengthen your application
- Check your grammar/spelling
- DO NOT just re-post your previous application <<<
- Make a great first impression
This -> "Have you voted for Herocraft ?: depends, has my whitelist application been accepted?"
Does not make a Great first impression, this is not a server where you "Vote" to help your self, you "Vote" to help the server out, please understand this, if you do not please PM me.

Honestly you first app was way better, it was in the right format this one is not, please edit your old one and I will look at it, Do Not post here, nor repost your app else where, please just use the edit option. Thanks.

If you follow these tips, chances are, you will get onto the Whitelist.

After you have improved your application, reply to it saying it's been updated.